Question

【題目】書面表達。
假如星期天你和朋友一起去仁愛農(nóng)場（Ren'ai Farm）去野餐，請對當時的情況展開合理的想象，以David的身份給Mary寫一封信，寫一篇70詞左右的短文。（注意書信格式）

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mary,

How is it going? I hope you are fine. I want to tell you something about myself.

On Sunday, my friends and I went to Ren'ai Farm to have a picnic. We met at eight in the morning and went there by bike. It took us about one hour to get there. The farm was very big and there were a lot of animals such as sheep, pigs, geese and so on. We had a picnic on the grass. We took our lunch there. We had some bread, beef, orange juice and some fruits. When we ate, we could see many trees and small hills. It was very beautiful. We enjoyed ourselves. Though we were tired, we were very happy.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

David

【解析】這篇作文要求我們以David的身份，給Mary寫一封信，給她介紹你周日和朋友們?nèi)ト蕫坜r(nóng)場野餐的事情。題目中并沒有規(guī)定我們要寫什么內(nèi)容，因此具體的情況需要我們自己展開想象，這對于學生們來說是比較困難的，在文中，學生們要合理想象野餐的情景，要有內(nèi)容，也要符合題目的要求。如我們可以考慮寫清楚什么時候去的，怎么去的，在那里看到了什么、做了些什么等。因為這是描述一件已經(jīng)發(fā)生了的事情，因此這篇短文我們應使用一般過去時態(tài)，我們要注意謂語動詞形式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式形式。應該用第一人稱，寫作時，還需要使用一些較好的句型和短語，使文章的表達流暢、連貫。