Question

【題目】根據(jù)提示寫一篇作文。標題是 Life in the future

提示：1.人口迅速增長。

2.工作時間縮短，娛樂和旅游時間將更充裕。

3.機器人做工，很多人面臨失業(yè)。

要求：1. 短文必須包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮。

2．字跡工整。

3．80個詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Life in the future

I have long been looking forward to life in the future. As far as I’m concerned, there must be lots of changes in the future. Firstly, I believe the population will increase rapidly. Besides, with working hours being shorter than ever before, people will have more time to relax. They will spend more time having fun and travelling. Most importantly, I think a lot of people will lose their jobs because there will be robots doing work such as cleaning and even dangerous work. But no matter what will happen, our life must be full of fun and comfort.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求對“Life in the future”這一話題展開預測未來生活，并適當發(fā)揮。首先，要認真審題，掌握來信中的信息，需要回答的問題。然后整體把握寫作的大致方向，謀篇布局。結合三個要點信息：1.人口迅速增長。2.工作時間縮短，娛樂和旅游時間將更充裕。3.機器人做工，很多人面臨失業(yè)。寫作中注意上下文的過渡，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：本文行文流暢，語言規(guī)范。文章使用三個連詞使文章層次清晰，表述分明，使用了很多句型和短語： “As far as I’m concerned, Firstly, Besides, Most importantly,”“ I have long been looking forward to life in the future.”以及復合句“Most importantly, I think a lot of people will lose their jobs because there will be robots doing work such as cleaning and even dangerous work. But no matter what will happen, our life must be full of fun and comfort.”的使用，豐富了文章的內容，為文章增色不少。