Question

12．假如你叫Simon，你最近對你班的30名男生和30名女生進行了上網(wǎng)目的調(diào)查．請用英語給China Daily的編輯寫一封信，說明調(diào)查結(jié)果，引起大家重視．
    注意：1．詞數(shù)為60-80詞．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)；2．文章應包括表
格表示的全部內(nèi)容；3．敘述調(diào)查結(jié)果時避免重復使用百分比；4．敘述過程適當添加評語．
    調(diào)查結(jié)果：

80%boys and girls	Search for some useful infortition
50%boys/60%girls	Read news
40%boys/90%girls	chat
30%boys/30%girls	Syudy English
90%boys/20%girls	Play games

Dear Editor，
     I have recently carried out a survey among the 30 boys and 30 girls in my class to find out what they use the Intemet for．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             
                                                                         This is the result of my survey．
                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                   Simon．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Maybe they think it's the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends也許他們認為這是獲得信息或者和朋友保持聯(lián)系的最便利的方式．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．

【高分句型二】
I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time我也希望父母會足夠的關(guān)注他們的孩子空閑時間使用電腦．
hope后是省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear editor，
I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet．
The girls'favorite is chatting，but few boys like it．What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it．Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet．Maybe they think it's the most convenient way to get information or keep in touch with friends．【高分句型一】As for studying，the numbers of boys and girls are equal，but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study．（調(diào)查結(jié)果）
In my opinion，the students had better make better and wise use of it．Otherwise，it's impossible for us to benefit from it．Moreover，I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time．【高分句型二】（ 我的看法）
  Yours，
Simon．

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