Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共15分）

你長(zhǎng)大了想干什么？再根據(jù)下表介紹一下你班同學(xué)的理想。（60詞左右）

Name Want to be Reason

Lindadoctor can help patients(病人)

Johnpoliceman it’s an exciting job.

Bobreporter likes talking with people

Amyteacher likes children and teaching

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Answer 1

【答案】

I want to be a writer when I grow up. I think a good writer can write many interesting stories. And they can bring happiness to many people. My classmates have different ideas. Linda wants to be doctor, because she wants to help patients. John wants to be a policeman. He thinks it is an exciting job. And Bob would like to be a reporter, because he likes talking with people. To be a teacher is Amy’s dream. She likes children and teaching.

【解析】

試題分析： 這篇作文圍繞未來的工作寫作，內(nèi)容包括自己以及四個(gè)同學(xué)想成為什么，以及原因。題目已經(jīng)給出了很詳細(xì)的信息和英語(yǔ)提示，寫作時(shí)只要把各個(gè)部分連接起來，組成完整的句子，或者加上一些連接詞，就能完成寫作。寫作時(shí)要注意句子的完整性和主謂一致。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章要點(diǎn)完整，句子表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利。關(guān)于未來工作的表達(dá)使用了不同的表達(dá)方式，如 want to be想成為；would like to be愿意成為；To be a teacher is Amy’s dream.成為一名老師是艾米的夢(mèng)想。另外文章使用了一些連接詞，如and而且，because因?yàn)椤?/span>