Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你叫ZhangWei,今年暑假你要到澳大利亞悉尼游學(xué)，你的寄宿家庭 Mr Green 一家想了解你的家庭情況、你的外形外貌、興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)以及你到澳大利亞后的愿望和活動(dòng)等。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)實(shí)際情況寫一封信給他們，信的字?jǐn)?shù)為60~80詞左右。

注意：1.不能透露具體校名及真實(shí)姓名，否則不予評(píng)分。

2. 信的開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Green,

Let me tell you something about my family and me._______________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________.

Zhang Wei

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mr Green,

Let me tell you something about my family and me. My name is Zhang Wei. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. I love my parents, especially my father. He is a doctor. He enjoys his job and is friendly to his sick people. He always supports me when I’m in trouble.

Of all my hobbies, I like playing football best. I want to be the best footballer in the future. To make my dream come true, I practice playing it after school.

I hope I can learn more about some foreign cultures and study English better. I think staying in your family will bring me lots of unforgettable experience.

Yours

Zhang Wei

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，向澳大利亞悉尼游學(xué)的寄宿家庭Mr Green一家介紹自己的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Myname is……，There are......， I love ......， I want to ......，I hope......，I think ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字和家人，接下來(lái)介紹我的愛好，最后指出我喜歡可以在他家有難忘的經(jīng)歷。此處be friendly to, be in trouble, like doing sth, want to do sth, in the future, come true, learn about, lots of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。