Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

86．假設(shè)你是李欣，你的美國(guó)筆友Annie想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇回信給她。

提示：1．How long have Chinese people celebrated the festival? 2．When do they celebrate it? What’s the festival about? 3．What activities do people have for the festival?

要求：1．短文要包含所列要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。3．詞數(shù)：80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival; 賽龍舟dragon-boat races；為了紀(jì)念in memory of; 兩千多年的歷史：a history of more than two thousand years Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Annie,

I learn from your letter that you want to learn about Chinese traditional festival-the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2,000 years. It comes on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi. Both of them are in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival because it can remind people of Chinese history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.

Best wishes,

Li Xin

【解析】

寫(xiě)作思路：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，提出自己要介紹的節(jié)日，即端午節(jié)。接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹這個(gè)節(jié)日的日期，人們?cè)谶@一天所進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)，最后人們對(duì)這個(gè)節(jié)日的看法。本篇文章首先I learn from your letter that you want to learn about Chinese traditional festival-the Dragon Boat Festival.開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，提出我要介紹的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日—端午節(jié)。接著第二段詳細(xì)介紹這個(gè)節(jié)日，It comes on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.節(jié)日的日期；On that day, people….列舉人們?cè)谶@一天所進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)；Both of them are in memory of Qu Yuan,且介紹了節(jié)日的歷史意義。其中用短語(yǔ)It comes on ….according to…, in memory of…..等詞語(yǔ)使文章增色很多。最后In a word,….對(duì)此節(jié)日做出總結(jié)，最后Best wishes給出自己的祝福。思路清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，非常完美的一篇作文。