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【題目】書面表達(dá)

86．假設(shè)你是李欣，你的美國筆友Annie想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)。請根據(jù)提示用英語寫一篇回信給她。

提示：1．How long have Chinese people celebrated the festival? 2．When do they celebrate it? What’s the festival about? 3．What activities do people have for the festival?

要求：1．短文要包含所列要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．不要出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。3．詞數(shù)：80左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival; 賽龍舟dragon-boat races；為了紀(jì)念in memory of; 兩千多年的歷史：a history of more than two thousand years Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Annie,

I learn from your letter that you want to learn about Chinese traditional festival-the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2,000 years. It comes on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi. Both of them are in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival because it can remind people of Chinese history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.

Best wishes,

Li Xin

【解析】

寫作思路：開篇點題，提出自己要介紹的節(jié)日，即端午節(jié)。接下來詳細(xì)介紹這個節(jié)日的日期，人們在這一天所進(jìn)行的活動，最后人們對這個節(jié)日的看法。本篇文章首先I learn from your letter that you want to learn about Chinese traditional festival-the Dragon Boat Festival.開篇點題，提出我要介紹的中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日—端午節(jié)。接著第二段詳細(xì)介紹這個節(jié)日，It comes on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.節(jié)日的日期；On that day, people….列舉人們在這一天所進(jìn)行的活動；Both of them are in memory of Qu Yuan,且介紹了節(jié)日的歷史意義。其中用短語It comes on ….according to…, in memory of…..等詞語使文章增色很多。最后In a word,….對此節(jié)日做出總結(jié)，最后Best wishes給出自己的祝福。思路清晰，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，非常完美的一篇作文。