Question

10．假如你是李華，就個(gè)人愛(ài)好帶來(lái)的困惑給英國(guó)朋友Stephen發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助．
要點(diǎn)：

李華	愛(ài)好	對(duì)太空旅行感興趣；經(jīng)常到圖書(shū)館閱讀資料
	困惑	得不到老師理解
	觀點(diǎn)	1．個(gè)人愛(ài)好有助于學(xué)習(xí)； 2．…（至少一點(diǎn)）
老師	觀點(diǎn)	時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上；成績(jī)就是一切

注意：1．詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；
     2．內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；
     3．條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名．
Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher．I don't know how to deal with it and would like your help．You know I am crazy about space travel．In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read．This makes my teacher very angry．To him，good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons，even at weekends．
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies．If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby，it will be of great value to my future development．But I don't think my teacher understands me．I feel bad about that．
What shall I do？Can you offer me some suggestions？I am looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是就個(gè)人愛(ài)好帶來(lái)的困惑給英國(guó)朋友Stephen發(fā)電子郵件進(jìn)行交流并請(qǐng)求幫助．注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
一、愛(ài)好：對(duì)太空旅行感興趣；經(jīng)常到圖書(shū)館閱讀資料
二、困惑：得不到老師理解
三、觀點(diǎn)：1．個(gè)人愛(ài)好有助于學(xué)習(xí)；
2．…（至少一點(diǎn)）
四、老師的觀點(diǎn)：時(shí)間應(yīng)花在功課上；成績(jī)就是一切
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be crazy about對(duì)…癡迷
make sb+adj讓某人怎么樣
spend+時(shí)間+on sth花時(shí)間做某事
between…and…在…和…之間（兩者之間）

高分句型
1．①I(mǎi)n my spare time I often go to the library ②to find something ③to read．
①in one's  spare time 在某人的業(yè)余時(shí)間
②to find something動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)
③to read．做后置定語(yǔ)，修飾something．
2．①I(mǎi)f I can achieve a balance ②between my schoolwork and my hobby，it will ③be of great value to my future development．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主將從現(xiàn)．
②between…and…在…和…之間，介詞短語(yǔ)．
③be of great value=be valuable，有價(jià)值的…

解答 Dear Stephen，
I am writing to tell you about my problem with my teacher．I don't know how to deal with it and would like your help．
You know I am crazy about space travel．In my spare time I often go to the library to find something to read．【高分句型】（愛(ài)好）This makes my teacher very angry．（困惑）To him，good marks are everything and I should spend more time on my lessons，even at weekends．（老師的觀點(diǎn)）
I think healthy hobbies are helpful for our studies．If I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobby，it will be of great value to my future development．【高分句型】But I don't think my teacher understands me．I feel bad about that．（我的觀點(diǎn)）
What shall I do？Can you offer me some suggestions？I am looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語(yǔ)從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對(duì)每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．