Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Daniel將要轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)你們班上學(xué)習(xí)，班主任請(qǐng)你在班會(huì)課上介紹一下Daniel的情況，以便讓同學(xué)們更快地了解他。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇80詞左右的文章，要求包含所有要點(diǎn)，不包括已經(jīng)給出的開(kāi)頭句。

姓名	Daniel
	15歲，來(lái)自福建。現(xiàn)在和父母一起住在蘇州。
學(xué)習(xí)方面	數(shù)學(xué)和歷史學(xué)得好，在英語(yǔ)方面需要幫助。
品質(zhì)方面	善良，樂(lè)于助人。（舉例說(shuō)明）
愛(ài)好方面	自你一至兩個(gè)愛(ài)好。

Boys and girls，Daniel is our new classmate．Now 1'd like to introduce him to all of you．

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【答案】

One possible version：

Boys and girls，Daniel is our new classmate．Now 1'd like to introduce him to all of you．

His name is Daniel, and he is 15 years old. He comes from Fujian province. Now he lives in Suzhou with his parents. He does well in maths and history, but he has some difficulty learning English, so he needs help. Daniel is kind and ready to help others. Last week, he saw a little boy fall down and helped him stand up. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He often plays it with his friends after school. I hope you will know more about him and make friends with him.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹新轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)的同學(xué)Daniel。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now 1'd like to...，and he is...，He does well in....，He likes ...，I think...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了新來(lái)的同學(xué)名字叫Daniel，接下來(lái)介紹他學(xué)習(xí)、品質(zhì)和愛(ài)好情況，最后希望大家能和他交朋友。此處用了come from, live in, do well in, have difficulty doing sth, be ready to, like doing sth, after school，know about, make friends with等這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。