Question

19．為了給Free the Children籌款，新洲市將于本周日舉辦美食節(jié)，你打算參加這個活動．現(xiàn)在你正在為本次活動做準(zhǔn)備，請闡述你在活動中要做的三件事，并說明理由．
要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
 2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．

What to do	Why
wear the school uniform	show good discipline…
cook fried rice and make dumplings	easy to cook，popular…
…	…

The city of Xinzhou will hold a food festival to raise money for Free the Children this Sunday．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
  I plan to wear our school uniforms，because they can show good disciplines．我打算穿校服，因為他們能表現(xiàn)出良好的紀(jì)律性．這是because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，因為…．
  高分句型二
    I hope I can raise more money for the children． 我希望我能為孩子們籌集更多的錢．這是一個賓語從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 The city of Xinzhou will hold a food festival to raise money for Free the Children this Sunday． It's really my honor to have the chance to take part in the activity．And being able to do things for the children is meaningful．I plan to do three things on that day．【開頭點明主題】
     First，I plan to wear our school uniforms，because they can show good disciplines【高分句型一，注意狀語從句的使用】．Second，I'm going to cook fried rice and make dumplings．They are popular and easy to cook．Last but not least，I will take my good friend Yang Fan there．He is kind and active．I need a good helper to sell my food．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹】
     I hope I can raise more money for the children【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．