Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Tom's lifestyle”為題，寫一篇不少于50詞的短文。

提示：1．Tom今年13歲，是我們班的尖子生，但身體不太好；

2．他經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉，但很少吃蔬菜和水果；

3．他各頓飯之間還吃零食，很少運(yùn)動(dòng)；

4．他需要改變他的生活方式；

5．他打算每天跑步30分鐘，每周游泳兩次；多吃蔬菜，多喝水，因?yàn)樗畬?duì)我們的健康有益。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Tom’s lifestyle

Tom is 13 years old. He is a top student in our class, but he is not healthy. He often eats hamburgers, chicken and ice cream. He seldom eats vegetables and fruit. He also eats sweet food between meals. He doesn’t like sports. He feels that it’s time for him to change his diet and lifestyle. He plans to run for 30 minutes every day and go swimming twice a week. He wants to eat more vegetables and drink much water, because water is the best drink. It has no calories.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹湯姆的生活方式。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is ...， He often eats...；及He wants to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。