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【題目】10月28日上午，重慶市萬州區(qū)一輛大巴車和小轎車發(fā)生碰撞，大巴車墜入江中造成多人死亡。事故的原因是由于司機(jī)乘客激烈爭執(zhí)互毆導(dǎo)致車輛失控。事發(fā)后，墜江事件引發(fā)了很多人的思考。請你結(jié)合下表，選擇其中一個對象，談?wù)勀阏J(rèn)為乘車過程中，司機(jī)和乘客究竟該如何做？闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。

Advice for drivers	Advice for passengers
drive carefully keep cool call the police if ... . . .	follow the rules be friendly, make requests politely not have a fight with... . . .

注意:(1)短文必須包括你所選擇一方的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

(3)詞數(shù):80~100；

(4)短文首句僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river was caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a _________(driver/ passenger),

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Answer 1

【答案】As we know, one month ago, the accident that a Chongqing bus fell into the river was caused by a fight between the driver and the passenger. So as a driver, you are supposed to keep calm in this condition. Your every decision is concerned with the life of all the passengers. You should drive carefully to ensure the safety of the passengers. If someone becomes mad and loses control of himself, you mustn’t lose yours. You can call the police at once and wait for the policeman to deal with it. Besides, you can also stop the car on the roadside first, and then deal with the disagreement with him. I think if we keep calm and think the safety first, we can prevent similar things from happening.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們對10月28日發(fā)生的公交車墜江事件，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。題目要求學(xué)生們從司機(jī)和乘客中選擇一個對象，談一談在乘車過程中，作為司機(jī)或乘客應(yīng)該怎樣做。表格中分別列出了寫作的提綱。因此寫作之前，學(xué)生們應(yīng)首先選擇一個對象，或者從司機(jī)的角度，或者從乘客的角度進(jìn)行敘述；然后根據(jù)表格中的提示，豐富更多的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容豐富、充實(shí)，然后用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。審題可知，短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主、第二人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。另外，英語句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句結(jié)構(gòu)，或使用非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或其他好的句型和短語，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。