Question

12．假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的"英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)座談會(huì)"，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議．

自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目的
	2英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法
	3課外自學(xué)的途徑
對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出至少2點(diǎn)建議）

注意：1詞數(shù)90左右．短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2短文需包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學(xué)校姓名和人名．
Dear teachers and schoolmates．it's a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you．
                                                                 
That's all．Thank you for your attention．

Answer 1

分析 考生首先需簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，再根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ�注意要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，對(duì)主題要審準(zhǔn)，審清，另外在提建議的時(shí)候，注意語(yǔ)氣要委婉．力求做到詳略得當(dāng)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，若能靈活多變地運(yùn)用一些復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)，力求不單一，這樣就可以使文章錦上添花．
解析：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿．根據(jù)題目要求應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)的口吻，同時(shí)要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)的時(shí)態(tài)．在行文時(shí)，注意要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，富有邏輯性．一些高級(jí)詞匯，固定短語(yǔ)和靈活多變的句式會(huì)為本文增色不少，要多多適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用．如：As everybody knows：vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．和Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．等．另外在提建議的時(shí)候，注意語(yǔ)氣要委婉．力求做到詳略得當(dāng)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰．

解答 答案：
Dear teachers and schoolmates，it's a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning
English with you．I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future．Naturally it's very
important for me to learn English well．As everybody knows：vocabulary is an important part of language，just
like bricks in a building．I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible．
After class，I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio．Besides，I've learned a lot from the
Internet and other sources．
     Now I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school．Firstly，we should
be given more opportunities to use what we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it．Secondly，I hope
our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them．
Finally，I suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals．
     Thank you for listening．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文審題準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，能包括所有的要點(diǎn)，在最后提出了幾條合理的建議．層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰．語(yǔ)言地道，且過(guò)渡自然流暢；一些高級(jí)詞匯、固定短語(yǔ)和靈活多變的句式如"As everybody knows，vocabulary is an important part of language，just like bricks in a building．"，"Besides，I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources．"等的應(yīng)用都彰顯了作者較扎實(shí)的英語(yǔ)基本功．