Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近你校進(jìn)行了一次“說出你的煩惱（Speak out your worries）的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容和提示要求寫一篇英語短文，匯報(bào)調(diào)查結(jié)果并向老師和父母提出建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息

學(xué)生比例	煩惱	你的建議
50%	作業(yè)多，睡眠不足，壓力大	？
30%	父母不理解，缺乏交流
20%	活動(dòng)少，體質(zhì)差

Our school has made a survey--- “Speak out your worries”. Here are the results.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has made a survey — "Speak out your worries"．Here are the results．About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day that they don’t have enough sleep. They feel stressed very much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents can’t understand them and are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．

Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we will try our best to improve our studies and we want to take more exercise to stay healthy as well.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫一份調(diào)查結(jié)果匯報(bào)，要將表格內(nèi)容表述全面并根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果寫出你的建議。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)表格提示，可知本文主要從兩個(gè)方面：煩惱及建議進(jìn)行寫作。要把不同問題比例的學(xué)生情況描述清楚。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文第一段開門見山，直接引入話題；然后對(duì)學(xué)生的煩惱及建議作了詳細(xì)的描述。詳略得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)突出，中心明確。第二段呼吁老師們、家長們給學(xué)生減負(fù)。主旨鮮明。這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：be strict with sb“對(duì)某人嚴(yán)厲”；get along well with“和某人合得來”；try one’s best to do sth“盡某人最大努力做某事”等等。在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。