Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

最近，你隨機(jī)調(diào)查了你校50名同學(xué)的課外英語學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀（結(jié)果見下面圖表）。請你就此用英語寫一篇短文，在英語課上進(jìn)行匯報(bào)，并談?wù)勀�的看法和建議。

注意：1、文章必須包括圖表中的四項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；

2、看法和建議至少兩條；

3、詞數(shù)80左右。

I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read textbooks. They think reading textbooks is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students make word cards. Some students go over their notes they have taken in class. However, only a few students ask the teachers for help. In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.等等。