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13．假如你叫李華，是九年級(jí)一班的學(xué)生．暑假即將來(lái)臨，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織部分學(xué)生參加暑期公益活動(dòng)．表格中是學(xué)校安排的兩項(xiàng)活動(dòng)及要求，請(qǐng)按照你自己的意愿和特長(zhǎng)選擇其中一項(xiàng)，然后根據(jù)你的選擇，給活動(dòng)負(fù)責(zé)人劉老師寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，提出申請(qǐng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80～100；
2．短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、學(xué)校及其他相關(guān)信息；
3．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾都已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
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Project	What to do	When
Old people's home visit	Cheer them up Tell them some jokes…	Every Tuesday morning
Kids'summer camp	Teach them to read Teach them to look after themselves…	Every Friday afternoon

Dear Mr Liu，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class One，Grade Nine．I read your notice yesterday．I'd like to work as a volunteer for the old people's home．I want to do something for the old people like my loving grandparents．I believe I can do it well，because I'm good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．And I'll be free on every Tuesday morning．I'll try to be a good volunteer．I'll sing and dance with them and we must have a wonderful time together．Besides，I can cook and do the laundry for them．
Please give me the opportunity!It will be a good experience for me．
I'm looking forward to your answer soon．
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是按照你自己的意愿和特長(zhǎng)選擇其中一項(xiàng)愿意參加的活動(dòng)針對(duì)其問(wèn)題給負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封信，注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．你想要選擇哪一個(gè)項(xiàng)目．
2．為什么？
3．打算怎樣做好？
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
want to do sth 想要做某事
be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
try to do sth 盡力做某事
do the laundry洗衣服
【高分句型】
1．①I(mǎi)'d like to ②work as a volunteer for the old people's home．
①would like to do sth 想要做某事
②work as 擔(dān)任…職位
2．I believe①I(mǎi) can do it well，②because I'm ③good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．
①省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句
③be good at 擅長(zhǎng)，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞
3．I'll try to be a good volunteer．
try to do sth 盡力做某事

解答 Dear Mr Liu，
I'm Li Hua，a student from Class One，Grade Nine．I read your notice yesterday．I'd like to work as a volunteer for the old people's home．【高分句型】（選擇第一個(gè)項(xiàng)目）I want to do something for the old people like my loving grandparents．I believe I can do it well，because I'm good at singing，dancing and doing some chores．【高分句型】And I'll be free on every Tuesday morning．（為什么？）
I'll try to be a good volunteer．【高分句型】I'll sing and dance with them and we must have a wonderful time together．Besides，I can cook and do the laundry for them．（打算怎樣做好？）
Please give me the opportunity!It will be a good experience for me．（請(qǐng)求）
I'm looking forward to your answer soon．
Best wishes，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書(shū)面表達(dá)的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)也容易區(qū)分表達(dá)，本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．