Question

17．Complete the title"I learned to be/do                      after the failure"and write a composition about it in at least 60words．

Answer 1

分析 此作文要求寫一篇提綱作文．題目為：learned to be/do                      after the failure．動筆前應(yīng)把題目補(bǔ)充完整，先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．可以包含這些要點(diǎn)：①考試后感覺怎么樣；②以后怎么辦．句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．
1．高分句型：I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday當(dāng)我被告知上星期五我沒有通過考試時，我感到非常驚訝和傷心．這是when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，從句中用的是被動語態(tài) I was told．
2．高分句型：I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best我知道我不會成功，除非我盡我最大的努力，首先這是that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，然后賓語從句中又有一個unless引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．

解答 I  learned to study harder after the failure
  I felt very surprised and sad when I was told that I had failed to pass an exam last Friday【高分句型一，注意時間狀語從句的使用】．It gave me a serious attack．【要點(diǎn)一】But after that I didn't give up．I studied much harder than before．I asked teachers for help as soon as I had any problem．Then I was successful in the next exam．As an old saying goes，"No pain，no gain．"I have learned that I won't be successful unless I do my best【高分句型一，注意賓語從句，狀語從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)二】

點(diǎn)評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，多閱讀此類題材，將詞匯歸類整理；動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞．寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．