Question

【題目】現(xiàn)如今，越來越多的動物瀕臨滅絕，請結(jié)合實際分析原因并至少提出兩條合理化建議。以“Saving the animals”為題，寫一篇不少于70詞的英語短文.

Saving the Animals

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Answer 1

【答案】

Saving the Animals

Do you know of any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? Many wild animals have already died out. And because of pollution and destroying forests, there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth. When farmers cut down trees, tigers and pandas can no longer hide, and we hunt, many tigers and pandas are killed by people. We should keep people from destroying forests, and encourage people to plant more trees.We should tell everyone animals are our friends. The government should shut down the factories which pollute rivers and air. If each of us does something, the world will be more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：本題屬于話題類作文，話題是“Saving the Animals”， 仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。寫作時不要僅僅要包括要點，而且要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯如If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth.（條件從句） When farmers cut down trees, tigers and pandas can no longer hide, and we hunt, many tigers and pandas are killed by people.（時間從句）。語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫。