Question

3．學(xué)校英語報(bào)就"中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做家務(wù)"為主題開展征文活動(dòng)．你認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該做家務(wù)嗎？請(qǐng)寫一篇約100詞的文章投稿．
要求：1）表明你的觀點(diǎn)并闡述理由；
2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)剬?duì)中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該做家務(wù)的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1贊同還是不贊同
2原因
3我的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
feel+adj感覺怎么樣
on the other hand 另一方面
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
devote oneself to doing sth致力于做某事
【高分句型】
1．①If we②help them with the housework，they'll③feel quite happy and pleased．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．
②help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
③feel+adj感覺怎么樣，系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．①Only through housework can we realize②we're members of our families，then ③to realize④we're parts of our society
①only放句首引起主謂倒裝．
②realize后接上省略了that的賓語從句．
③動(dòng)詞不定式作為目的狀語從句．
④realize后接上省略了that的賓語從句．

解答 Should we help our parents do some housework？
Students should help our parents do some housework．（應(yīng)該做家務(wù)）
Firstly，after a whole day's work，our parents must be very tired．If we help them with the housework，they'll feel quite happy and pleased．【高分句型】On the other hand，doing housework not only train our ablities，but also help us make a sense of resposibility．Only through housework can we realize we're members of our families，then to realize we're parts of our society．【高分句型】We can devote ourselves to the world．（原因）
So，I think it necessary for us to do some housework．（我的看法）

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