Question

10．假設(shè)你是Dale，你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)來(lái)郵件，希望你知道你最感謝的人是誰(shuí)，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給她回郵件，郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．他/她的外表、興趣、愛(ài)好和職業(yè)等；
2．感謝的理由．
要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
3．字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右，郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；
Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．
She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給出簡(jiǎn)要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)的提綱類作文．內(nèi)容為假設(shè)你是Dale，你的網(wǎng)友Cindy發(fā)來(lái)郵件，希望你知道你最感謝的人是誰(shuí)，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給她回郵件．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱為第三人稱單數(shù)．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．最需感謝的人；2．他/她的外表、興趣、愛(ài)好和職業(yè)等；3．感謝的理由．常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：try to do，make sb．do sth．，take sb．to…，定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句等．

解答 Dear Cindy，
Thank you for sending me your photos．You wonder who the person I thank most is．Now let me tell you．
My mother is the person who I should thank most．She is an English teacher in a middle school．She is of medium height，and wear a pair of glasses．She likes reading and playing ping-pong．She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother．She is very busy every day．But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school．When I am ill，she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time．But sometimes when she falls ill，she never goes to see a doctor．
For my mother，I'll do my best to be a good child．I'll love her forever．
Best wishes
Dale

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇限制了作文范疇并給出了簡(jiǎn)要寫(xiě)作提綱的作文．考生在作文時(shí)可先列好提綱，主要從兩方面展開(kāi)自己的作文．再根據(jù)提示，將提綱進(jìn)一步完善，并進(jìn)行必要的發(fā)揮，使行文流暢，感情真摯．適當(dāng)使用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句來(lái)完善句子，使文章更出彩．