Question

5．良好的習(xí)慣成就美好的未來．作為青少年，如何培養(yǎng)良好的習(xí)慣呢？請你以"How to Develop Good Habits"為題，根據(jù)以下的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文．
提示：1．上課認(rèn)真聽講，每天按時(shí)完成作業(yè)；2．閑暇時(shí)多讀課外書籍； 3．多吃蔬菜、水果；
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要求：1．用上所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文條理清楚、語句連貫；
2．詞數(shù)80左右，短文開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得提及考生自己的真實(shí)姓名．
How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to develop good habits．                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week對于我們來說一周鍛煉三四次是必要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

【高分句型二】
What's more，get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late再者，足夠的睡眠，早睡不要熬夜．
what's more 再者

解答 How to Develop Good Habits
It's very important for us to develop good habits．As teenagers，what should we do？In my opinion，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day．（上課認(rèn)真聽講，每天按時(shí)完成作業(yè)）In spare time，we had better read some books to get more knowledge（閑暇時(shí)多讀課外書籍）．Also，we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food．（多吃蔬菜、水果；）It's necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week．【高分句型一】（多鍛煉）What's more，get enough sleep，go to bed early and don't stay up late．【高分句型二】（充足的睡眠）Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean．Exercise is fun and relaxing．It's healthy for the mind and body．Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily．

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