Question

8．兩個月前，膠東在線就我校初四學(xué)生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃進(jìn)行了一次問卷調(diào)查．請根據(jù)圖表中提供的數(shù)據(jù)信息，寫一篇100-120詞的調(diào)查報告，并結(jié)合實際談?wù)勀愕挠^點和畢業(yè)后的人生理想．
要求：1．行文不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名； 2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．


  Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．
In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I'm ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容為根據(jù)圖表中提供的數(shù)據(jù)信息，寫一篇調(diào)查報告，并結(jié)合實際談自己的觀點和畢業(yè)后的人生理想．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點包括：1．描述圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)信息；2．結(jié)合實際談自己的觀點；3．畢業(yè)以后的人生理想．
常用重點句型和短語：
hope to do希望做某事
would like to do 想要做某事
so as to 以便，為了…
in my opinion 由我看來
be determined to do決定做某事
so that 以便，為了
參考句子：
65% of us hope to have chances to go to senior school．我們中有65%的人想要有機會上高中．
About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools in order to get jobs easily after graduation．大約20%的人想要學(xué)習(xí)有用的技能以便在畢業(yè)后能后很容易地找到工作．
I think we teenagers should have a design for our future life．我認(rèn)為我們青少年應(yīng)當(dāng)對我們的未來有規(guī)劃．

解答 Two months ago，Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation．Here is the result．【寫作原因】
65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school．About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation．And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families．Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims．I think they should make it clear what to do next．【調(diào)查結(jié)果】
In my opinion，we teenagers should have a design for our future life．Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time．【觀點】
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients．So，I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University．I'm ready for a hard but colorful senior school life．【人生理想】

點評 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文．圖表內(nèi)容要包括在作文中，本題中圖表內(nèi)容較為簡單，要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語法或詞匯的錯誤．