Question

1．加拿大中學(xué)生Peter在你校學(xué)習(xí)期滿，回國后寫一一封感謝信，同時指出了同學(xué)們的一些不良行為．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，請根據(jù)要點提示給Peter回一封電子郵件．
要點提示：
（1）表示感謝；
（2）表達(dá)意愿（告別高聲喧嘩、亂丟亂扔等不良行為）；
（3）…
要求：
（1）80詞左右．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．
As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．You will see a clearer school．
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文--感謝信．針對題干的內(nèi)容可知，首先要對Peter提出的問題表達(dá)感謝；其次針對Peter提出的問題提出若干改正的建議，此時常用到表達(dá)建議的情態(tài)動詞should或shouldn't；最后表述自己的學(xué)校會變好的．

解答 參考范文：Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't  write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．You will see a clearer school．
     Best wishes!
Yours，
Li  Hua

點評 完成書面表達(dá)時要注意文章的連貫性，要求所寫文章有邏輯，有條理，不要讓人讀過之后感到只是若干句子的機(jī)械拼湊．所以會用到一些連詞，比如：first；also；what's more等．