Question

【題目】為了取得優(yōu)異的成績，許多中學生利用課后時間努力學習，無法參加任何課外活動。假設你是林浩，根據(jù)提示及要求給班主任楊老師寫一封電子郵件，說說你的想法。

提示：

①為了取得好成績，我們每天忙于學習，幾乎沒有時間去參加課外活動(after-school activity)，一些同學甚至放棄了自己的業(yè)余愛好；

②有句諺語說：只工作不玩耍,聰明的孩子也會變傻。希望楊老師能鼓勵我們參加各種活動，鍛煉身體。只有放松身心，我們才能更好地投入到學習中去。

要求：

①語句通順連貫，條理清晰；

②70詞左右(開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Ms. Yang,

To get good grades, we spend most of time studying every day. _______________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope that you can think about my advice. Thank you very much!

Yours,

Lin Hao

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,

To get good grades, we spend most of time studying every day. We have little time to take part in after-school activities. Some students even give up their hobbies.

As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I hope you can encourage us to take part in different kinds of activities and take more exercise. In this way, our bodies and minds will get relaxed. That is good for our studies.

I hope that you can think about my advice. Thank you very much!

Yours,

Lin Hao

【解析】為了取得優(yōu)異的成績，許多中學生利用課后時間努力學習，無法參加任何課外活動。假設你是林浩，根據(jù)提示及要求給班主任楊老師寫一封電子郵件。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。