Question

【題目】文段表達。

根據(jù)中英文提示寫一段話。要求：意思連貫、符合邏輯，字數(shù)不少于60詞。

人生如船，夢想是帆。英語課上，同學(xué)們以“My Dream Job”為題展開討論，暢想自己理想的職業(yè)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，向?qū)W校廣播站投稿，說說自己理想的職業(yè)及理由，告訴老師和同學(xué)們，你打算如何實現(xiàn)自己的理想。

提示詞語：discussion, difficult, decide, knowledge, improve,

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Answer 1

【答案】

We had a discussion in our classroom last month. The topic is, “What is your dream job?” Everybody has his dream. Some want to be teachers, others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy, I was very weak. Once I was terribly ill. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the nearby hospital, but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people’s lives. From then on, I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor. But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

【解析】

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