Question

【題目】書面表達

家有家規(guī)，校有校紀。請以“School Rules”為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下你們學校的一些規(guī)章制度。

要求：60詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；條理清晰，意思連貫；語句通順，語法正確；書寫規(guī)范。

提示：①上課不能遲到；②教室要保持(keep)干凈；③要向老師問好(say hello)；④不允許在教室里吃東西；⑤不允許在課堂上聽音樂、玩游戲。

School Rules

There are many rules in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】School Rules

There are many rules in our school. For example, we can't arrive late for class. We should also keep the classroom clean③. We should② say hello to teachers when we see them. We are not allowed to eat in the classroom. We can't listen to music in class. We can't① play games in class, either. I think these rules are reasonable. They are good for us.④

【解析】本文是敘述我們的校規(guī)，所以句子用第一人稱we，因為敘述的是現(xiàn)在的情況，因此句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。不要遺漏要點，要注意上下文的銜接，不能用漢語式的英語。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：arrive late for class上課遲到；say hello to teachers給老師打招呼；listen to music聽音樂；be good for sb對某人有益。用了there be句型，用了賓語從句，如：I think these rules are reasonable.增加了文章的亮點。