Question

【題目】根據(jù)下面圖示，請你代表九(1)班全體學(xué)生向張老師推薦Jack當新學(xué)期的班長。因為Jack具有以下品質(zhì)：

要求：

1、短文必須包括提示內(nèi)容，并組適當增加細節(jié)(根據(jù)形容詞，必須用相應(yīng)的行為動作進行描述)。

3、字數(shù)100左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new monitor. We think he has

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Yours sincerely,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,

We are writing to recommend Jack as our new monitor. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.

Jack is very confident. He thinks he can do anything if he tries his best. He is not afraid of making a speech in front of many people.Jack is organized and never forgets the things he needs to do He has learnt to use the computer to get himself more organized. Jack is clever. He always comes up with good ideas and he has won several science competitions. Jack is also creative. He is good at painting. His creative works have won high praise from classmates and teachers.

We think Jack is the most suitable person to be our new chairperson. We hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Tom

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們寫一封推薦信，推薦Jack做新學(xué)期的班長，并講述其原因。題目中用圖示展示了Jack具備的一些品質(zhì)，我們要將這些品質(zhì)敘述清楚。觀察圖表可知，這里只給出了四個形容詞clever聰明、confident仔細、creative有創(chuàng)造性、organized做事有條理的。我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些形容詞，補充一些細節(jié)，用相應(yīng)的行為動作來體現(xiàn)他們。這些內(nèi)容是需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，是寫作中一個最大的難點。其次需要注意文章語言的表達，英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，所以我們不能用漢語的思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)使用適當?shù)木湫汀⑼暾�的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，并選擇適當?shù)脑~和短語，運用合適的時態(tài)。為提升文章的檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用一些較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如各類從句，像賓語從句、狀語從句等。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，增強文章的連貫性。