Question

6．德州正在創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city），假設(shè)你所在的學校要開展以"做文明市民，從我做起"為主題的宣傳月活動．請你寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勅绾巫觯�以下�?nèi)容供參考：
1．衣著整潔，不說臟話；2．禮貌待人，熱心助人；3．遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4．…
注意：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)校名和自己的姓名；
2．內(nèi)容可適當擴展．
3.80詞左右．
In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities．
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．We should never say dirtywords．It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．We should also obey traffic rules．When thetraffic lights are red，we should stop．Don't throwlitter or spit about． And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勅绾巫鑫拿魇忻瘢畷r態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．衣著整潔，不說臟話；2．禮貌待人，熱心助人；3．遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾；4．其他
常用到的重點短語：
in order to 為了…
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
be friendly to sb 對某人友好
obey the rules 遵守規(guī)則
had better do sth最好做某事
【高分句型】
1．①In order to build a civilized city，we students should②try our best to behave well in the activities．
①in order to 為了…，做目的狀語．
②try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事

2．①Be friendly to others and always ②ready to help the people ③in need．
①be friendly to sb 對某人友好
②be ready to do sth樂于做某事
③in need在危急中，介詞短語做后置定語，修飾前面的people．

解答 In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities．【高分句型】
      It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．We should never say dirty words．（衣著整潔，不說臟話）It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．【高分句型】For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．（禮貌待人，熱心助人）We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．Don't throw litter or spit about．（遵守交通規(guī)則，不亂扔垃圾） And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．（其他：公共場所不大聲說笑）
     If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應(yīng)加強閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法．