Question

15．未來(lái)很美好，你長(zhǎng)大以后打算做什么？廚師、記者、藝術(shù)家…描述一個(gè)你夢(mèng)想的職業(yè)．
提示：
1．短文應(yīng)含思維導(dǎo)圖中相關(guān)的要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫．
2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3．詞數(shù)不少于80，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
When I grow up，I'm going to be a singer．當(dāng)我長(zhǎng)大后，我要成為一名歌手．   這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．
高分句型二
 I hope my dream can come true．我希望我的夢(mèng)想成真．這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I hope是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 When I grow up，I'm going to be a singer．【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】【開篇點(diǎn)明主題】I love music and I'm good at singing．I want to be a singer like Lady Gaga．I can sing beautiful songs for people and make them happy．And also I can make much money．Then I can buy a beautiful house with a garden for my parents because they do so much for me．
To realize my dream，first，I'm going to join the singing club and practice singing as often as possible．Second，I'm going to be a student at a music school．At last，I'm going to take part in some singing competition to improve myself．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹為什么要做歌手以及如何為實(shí)現(xiàn)理想而努力】I hope my dream can come true．
【高分句型二，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，句子要通順連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．