Question

20．廣州目前出現(xiàn)了灰霾天氣（haze weather），我們的自然環(huán)境質(zhì)量已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)重要問題，假如你是Rose，是番禺區(qū)的一名初中生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示向廣州市環(huán)保局局長(zhǎng)寫一封以建設(shè)美麗廣州為主題的倡議信．
1．原因：汽車和工廠排放有害的氣體，部分樹木被砍伐，污水被排入河里，大街上可見丟棄的垃圾．
2．嚴(yán)重性：污染的空氣對(duì)人類的健康十分有害．
3．相應(yīng)措施：我們應(yīng)采取行動(dòng)解決環(huán)境問題，保持環(huán)境干凈，多種植樹木，公眾場(chǎng)合不允許吸煙．
4．你的一至兩個(gè)建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；
2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分．
Dear Director，
I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．
                                            
Sincerely yours，
Rose．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems．因此減少環(huán)境污染是很重要的，因?yàn)樗鼈儠?huì)導(dǎo)致健康問題．it is+形容詞+to do sth句型
句型二：To make Guangzhou a beautiful city．使廣州成為一個(gè)美麗的城市．不定式to make做目的狀語．

解答 Dear Director，
      I'm a junior student named Rose from Panyu District．Recently，the haze weather appears in Guangzhou，the quality of our natural environment has become an important problem，environmental protection and building beautiful Guangzhou have become hot topics too．In Guangzhou，cars and factories produce harmful gases，some trees are cut down，dirty water is poured into the river，we can find rubbish in the street．The polluted air does great harm to people's health．Therefore it's important to reduce the environmental pollution because they can lead to health problems【高分句型一】．To make Guangzhou a beautiful city【高分句型二】，we should take actions to deal with our environmental problems，we should keep our environment clean and plant more trees．Also，smoking should not be allowed in public．In my opinion，calling on more and more people to pay attention to the environmental protection is important too．If we do the things above，Guangzhou will become more and more beautiful．
                                                                                                                        Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                 Rose．

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