Question

【題目】假如你是李軍，是某中學初一的一名學生。你和父母在五一假期期間去了倫敦旅行。請根據(jù)下列提示，給你的筆友吉姆寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的旅行經(jīng)歷和感受。郵件格式已給出。

要點：1.乘飛機抵達；

2．在倫敦停留3天；

3．行程：(1)第一天參觀了英國國家博物館；

(2)第二天乘船沿泰晤士河旅行；

(3)第三天去了“倫敦眼”，飽覽倫敦風光。

4．個人感受

要求：1．詞數(shù)70左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

2．字跡工整，語言流暢，表達正確，邏輯清晰。

From:Li Jun

Sent:Sunday

To:Jim

Subject: My holiday in London

Hi, Jim! I went to London with my parents duringMay Day holiday.____________________________________________________________________

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Love,

Li Jun

Answer 1

【答案】From: Li Jun

Sent: Sunday

To: Jim

Subject: My holiday in London

Hi,Jim! I went to London with my parents during May Dayholiday. We stayed there for three days. After we arrived inLondon by plane, we began our tour of the city. On the firstday, we visited the British Museum with lots of world-famousworks of art. On the second day, we took a boat tour on theRiver Thames. It was so great ! On the last day, we went to theLondon Eye and did some sightseeing. We enjoyed ourselvesvery much. London is a beautiful city with a long history.

Love,

Li Jun

【解析】本題是書信類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件，告訴自己的筆友旅行經(jīng)歷和感受。材料已給出，寫作的時候要根據(jù)寫作要點去組織材料，還要有適當?shù)耐卣�，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文。由于是寫自己的旅行經(jīng)歷，因此人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般過去時態(tài)，最后的個人感受可以運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。描述時要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型。