Question

10．請以"My life in ten years為題，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇不少于60詞的短文．提示 （短文須包含下列要點）：
1．What do you want to be in ten years？And why？
2．where will you live in ten years？And why？
3．Say something about your family or your free time activities in ten years．
4．What should you do to achieve your dreams？
注意：短文中，不得出現(xiàn)任何與考生本人有關的真實人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分．
My life in ten years．
In ten years，I think I'll be a reporter．I will live in an apartment with my sister．Because I don't like living alone．And I can play with her in my apartment．So in ten years，I will be a good reporter．I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another places on business．In ten years，I will have many different pets．Maybe I will keep a pet turtle．I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time．And I will go to Londonon my vacation．So，my life in ten years will be better and better!．

Answer 1

分析 因為是設想十年之后的生活，因此應該用一般將來時，其中要點要包括：1．十年之后你想做什么？為什么？2．你將會在哪里定居？為什么？3．描述一下那時你的生活．4．為了理想你該怎么做．在寫作過程中要注意時態(tài)的運用，還要層次分明，盡量用簡單句．

解答 My life in ten years
    In ten years，I think I'll be a reporter．I will live in an apartment with my sister．Because I don't like living alone．And I can play with her in my apartment．So in ten years，I will be a good reporter．I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another places on business．In ten years，I will have many different pets．Maybe I will keep a pet turtle．I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time．And I will go to London on my vacation．
So，my life in ten years will be better and better!

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．