Question

以“Animals, our friends!”為題寫一篇短文。
要求：1）70詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2）展開自己的想象，可以通過“dogs, cows, hens 等幾種動物來進(jìn)行說明。
3）適當(dāng)運用get on well with….; get …from…; guide dogs; the blind; milk; hens; eggs; interesting; for example; save 等詞匯。
4）意思連貫，語句通順，書寫工整。
Animals, our friends!
It is important to ________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Animals, our friends!
It is important to get on well with animals because some of the animals can give us a lot of help. For example, guide dogs are the eyes of the blind. They help the blind a lot in their daily lives. Cows provide 
us with milk. We get eggs from hens every day. Some of the animals are very interesting. Animals are our friends. I can’t imagine a world without animals. But animals are fewer and fewer. Let’s do something to save them.

解析試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是寫動物是我們的朋友，所以寫作時，應(yīng)敘述與動物相處的重要性，以及如何與動物相處。注意書寫時進(jìn)行舉例說明；注意人稱的運用，以及時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。應(yīng)該將提示語合理運用。還應(yīng)注意表達(dá)的層次性，以及連詞的運用。
考點：本題考查提綱作文
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式，但也盡量不要用單一的句型。