Question

3．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，80詞左右．
2013年，第十二屆全運會將在遼寧召開．目前"全民健身，陽光行動"的理念使學(xué)校出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化：每天運動時間延長了，運動項目增加了，學(xué)生體質(zhì)增強了，校園生活豐富了．請以"Sports in Our School"為題給寫一篇報道．
要點：1．time for sports                       
2．kinds of sports
3．change of students'health and study      
4．change of school life
要求：（1）內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯
（2）不得透露考生姓名、學(xué)校等信息．
Sports in Our School

As we know，The Twelfth National Athletic Meet will be held in Liaoning，so the idea that"sports for all，sunshine action"has made a big difference to our school．
Great changes have taken place in our school，for example，ithas takenstudents more time to exercise，which is a good change．Besides，there have been more kinds of sports in our school，like football，basketball，tennis，ping-pong and so on．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．It's also a good way to improve their study．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．
From all the above you can see，sports in our school has changeda lot．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇記敘文，讓我們結(jié)合題目要求，適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，從四個方面對我們學(xué)校的運動的變化做一個描述，由題目要求可確定主要時態(tài)為現(xiàn)在完成時，強調(diào)"全民健身，陽光行動"這個理念對學(xué)校的運動產(chǎn)生的影響，全文分三個部分，第一個部分總的介詞這個理念對我們學(xué)校的運動的變化產(chǎn)生了影響；第二個部分描述具體的影響；第三個部分總結(jié)我們學(xué)校的運動發(fā)生生變化．
重要的短語和句型：
1．a(chǎn)s sb know 如某人所知
2．make a difference 起作用，有影響
3．take place 發(fā)生，舉行
4．it has taken sb time to do sth 某人花時間做某事
5．there be句型 有
6．because of 因為
高分句型：
1．for example，it has taken students more time to exercise，which is a good change
比如，學(xué)生花更多的時間鍛煉，這是一個好的變化．
for example 比如；it has taken sb time to do sth 某人花時間做了某事，it作形式主語，不定式是真正的主語；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句．
2．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．
而且，學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)提高了，他們越來越健康．
What's more 而且；a lot 許多；比較級+and+比較級 越來越…
3．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．
由于花更多的時間做運動，學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活越來越豐富．
because of 因為；spend time doing sth 花時間做某事；get+比較級+and+比較級 變得越來越…

解答 Sports in Our School
    As we know，The Twelfth National Athletic Meet will be held in Liaoning，so the idea that"sports for all，sunshine action"has made a big difference to our school．（總要概括理念對學(xué)校運動產(chǎn)生了影響）
    Great changes have taken place in our school，for example，it has taken students more time to exercise，which is a good change．【高分句型1】Besides，there have been more kinds of sports in our school，like football，basketball，tennis，ping-pong and so on．What's more，student's body quility has improved a lot，they are healthier and healthier．【高分句型2】It's also a good way to improve their study．Because of spending time doing sports，student's school life is getting richer and richer．【高分句型3】（具體介紹各種變化）
    From all the above you can see，sports in our school has changed a lot．（總結(jié)學(xué)校運動發(fā)生了變化）

點評 作文類題考查學(xué)生平時詞匯量與表達(dá)法的積累，這篇作文要根據(jù)題目要求，結(jié)合生活實際適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾觾?nèi)容，如運動時間延長的好處，運動項目具體增加了哪些等，還要注意一些連接詞的使用，如besides，what's more，這樣會顯得文章更連貫，最后要檢查一遍，看是否有錯的單詞或表達(dá)．