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【題目】過(guò)生日互贈(zèng)禮物在中學(xué)生中似乎成為一種時(shí)尚，甚至有的學(xué)生還去飯店搞生日聚會(huì)。對(duì)此同學(xué)們有不同的看法。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯寫一封信，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。

贊成	為同學(xué)們提供交際機(jī)會(huì)；利于增進(jìn)同學(xué)之間的友誼；學(xué)習(xí)之余可以放松心情。
反對(duì)	容易造成對(duì)時(shí)間和金錢的浪費(fèi)；導(dǎo)致攀比；對(duì)青少年學(xué)習(xí)和成長(zhǎng)造成不利影響。
你的觀點(diǎn)	......

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）

2.短文須包括表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.參考詞匯：攀比：keep up with the Joneses

Dear Editor,

I'm a middle school student named Li Hua . Recently, we often have to buy

presents for our classmates’birthdays, and sometimes, we are invited to

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I'm a middle school student named Li Hua. Recently, we often have to buy presents for our classmates' birthdays, and sometimes, we are invited to their birthday parties in expensive hotels, which caused us to think whether students should spend so much money for birthdays.

About this there are two different views. Some students think it provides us with a good chance to communicate with each other and develop our friendship, and besides, we can relax after hard work at school. However, some other students think it's a waste of money and time and can lead us to getting into the bad habit of trying to keep up with the Joneses, which has a bad effect on our growth and studies.

As far as I'm concerned, it's not easy for our parents to make money and keep us at school for education. So there is no need for us to do like that. We must treasure our parents' labor and put our hearts into our studies.

What do you think about it? I'm expecting your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯寫一封信，介紹同學(xué)們對(duì)過(guò)生日舉行生日聚會(huì)和互贈(zèng)禮物有不同的看法，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文的主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一、三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I'm...，About this there are...，Some students think...，it's not easy for our parents to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。