Question

有許多同學(xué)在學(xué)校就餐時(shí)存在不同程度的浪費(fèi)食物的現(xiàn)象，對(duì)此請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，以Don’t waste any more為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，呼吁大家加入“光盤(pán)行動(dòng)”，節(jié)約糧食，防止浪費(fèi)。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
1. 許多同學(xué)沒(méi)意識(shí)到節(jié)約的重要性；2. 實(shí)現(xiàn)偉大中國(guó)夢(mèng)需要我們厲行節(jié)約。3. 有些同學(xué)喜歡買(mǎi)許多食物，餐盤(pán)里剩得多也就倒了，甚至到處亂扔。4. 全世界還有許多人生活艱辛，缺乏食物，甚至有些孩子死于饑餓。5. 我們應(yīng)養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，加入“光盤(pán)行動(dòng)”。
參考詞匯：“Clear Your Plate” Campaign 光盤(pán)行動(dòng)；leave…on the plate(留……在盤(pán)里)；pour…into(倒進(jìn)……)；rubbish can（垃圾桶）；take an active part積極行動(dòng)起來(lái)。
Don’t Waste Any More
Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. ____________________________
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Answer 1

Food is important to us. It’s everyone’s duty to save food. ①But at school not everyone can realize this. ②In order to make China dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. ③Many students waste much food. For example, some students buy more food than they need. They leave much on the plate and then pour it into the rubbish can. Some students even throw the food everywhere for fun. ④What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. They live a hard life and many of them, especially some children, die of hunger. ⑤We should have a good habit. Let’s join the “Clear Your Plate” Campaign and take an active part together!

試題分析：本題要求以Don’t waste any more為標(biāo)題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，呼吁大家加入“光盤(pán)行動(dòng)”，節(jié)約糧食，防止浪費(fèi)。所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】亮點(diǎn)一：In order to make China dream come true, we should save everything as well as the food in our life. 為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)的夢(mèng)想，我們要節(jié)約一切以及我們生活中的食物。亮點(diǎn)二：What’s more, lots of people are short of food in the world. 更重要的是，世界上許多人缺乏食物。