Question

17．去年暑假你是在那里度過的呢？是外出度假還是待在家里？都做了些什么呢？請以My Last Summer Vacation為題寫一篇短文，描述你去年的暑假生活，80-100詞．
要求：條理清楚，語言流暢，語法正確，內(nèi)容充實(shí)．
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
The sea water was as blue as the sky，and it was very clean as well．海水像天空一樣藍(lán)，而且它也非常干凈．
as…as 像…一樣
as well 也
句型二：
When I was swimming in the sea，as if I was a little fish．當(dāng)我在海里游泳的時(shí)候，好像我是一條小魚．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
as if 好像
in the sea在海里

解答 Last year，I have spent a happy summer holiday．During the holiday，I went to Dalian for a visit，there I saw the beautiful sea，it was really amazing．（暑假期間所見到的事） The sea water was as blue as the sky，and it was very clean as well．【高分句型一】Also，the beach in Dalian was very nice，we built a small sand palace．When I was swimming in the sea，as if I was a little fish．【高分句型二】（所做的事） I like that feeling very much．That's my trip to Dalian，it's really unforgettable．I had a great time．This year，I want to Guilin．（今年暑假的打算）

點(diǎn)評 寫作主要考查學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語語言的能力，涉及學(xué)生的詞匯量，正確運(yùn)用單詞的能力，對所學(xué)語法的掌握程度，能否按照英語習(xí)慣正確表達(dá)所要表達(dá)的意思的能力等等．