【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加或一個(gè)單詞的刪除，其他錯(cuò)誤為單詞的修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)∧，并在其下面寫出增加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My hometown is a beautiful place. It stands beside the wide river and is rich in fish and rice. And ten years ago，it was a poor town. Many people had no jobs. They used live a hard life. In the last ten years，great change have taken place here. The streets have been widened. New roads have appear. Factories，schools，hospitals and cinemas have been build one after another. The life of the people has been greatly improved a lot.

I love me hometown. I love the people here. They are still working hardly to make it richer and rich，more and more beautiful.

【答案】My hometown is a beautiful place. It stands beside the ,a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. And, But ten years ago，it was a poor town. Many people had no jobs. They used ∧,to live a hard life. In the last ten years，great change, changes have taken place here. The streets have been widened. New roads have appear, appeared. Factories，schools，hospitals and cinemas have been build, built one after another. The life of the people has been greatly(/去掉greatly) improved a lot.

I love me, my hometown. I love the people here. They are still working hardly, hard to make it richer and rich, richer，more and more beautiful.

【解析】

短文的作者介紹了自己美麗的家鄉(xiāng)。它坐落在一條寬闊的河流旁邊，盛產(chǎn)魚(yú)和大米。但是十年前，它還是一個(gè)貧窮的小鎮(zhèn)，人們過(guò)著困難的生活。在過(guò)去的10年中，這兒發(fā)生了很大的變化，道路被加寬，出現(xiàn)了很多的新道路，工廠、學(xué)校、醫(yī)院還有電影院一個(gè)接一個(gè)的建立起來(lái)，人們的生活水平得到了很大的提高。

1. 句意：它坐落在一條寬闊的河流旁邊。第一次提到這條河流用 不定冠詞a表示泛指。故the 改為 a。

2. 句意：但十年前，那是一個(gè)貧窮的小鎮(zhèn)。本句與前一句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不是并列關(guān)系。所以And 改為 But 。

3. 句意：他們過(guò)去過(guò)著艱苦的生活。本題考查固定詞組used to do sth.過(guò)去常常做某事，所以在used 后加上 to。

4. 句意：在過(guò)去的十年里，這里發(fā)生了巨大的變化。此句中現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)的助動(dòng)詞使用的是have，根據(jù)主謂一致的原則，名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故change改為 changes。

5. 句意：新的道路出現(xiàn)了。此句是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，助動(dòng)詞have后面要跟動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞形式，故appear改為appeared。

6. 句意：工廠、學(xué)校、醫(yī)院和電影院已經(jīng)一個(gè)接一個(gè)地建成。此處是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，要用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞形式，build 的過(guò)去分詞是 built，故build 改為 built。

7. 句意： 我喜歡我的家鄉(xiāng)。名詞hometown的前面要用形容詞性物主代詞，故me改為my。

8. 句意：人民的生活有了很大的改善。a lot修飾improve，不能再用greatly修飾，故把greatly去掉。

9. 句意：他們還在努力工作。修飾動(dòng)詞work需要用副詞，hard 即為副詞，辛勤地、努力地，hardly 是“幾乎不”的意思，表否定。故hardly改為hard。

10. 句意：使它變得越來(lái)越富裕，越來(lái)越美麗。此處考查形容詞比較級(jí)的用法，越來(lái)越…，比較級(jí)重疊用 and 連接，越來(lái)越富裕是 richer and richer，故rich 改為 richer。

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