Question

【題目】【云南省2015年中考英語試題】書面表達(dá)（滿分10分）

Growing up with …

提示：在你的成長(zhǎng)過程中，一定有人陪伴你、幫助你、影響你、感動(dòng)你，讓你能夠健康快樂地成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)以“Growing up with…”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

要求：1. 請(qǐng)把題目補(bǔ)充完整；

2. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；

3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；

4. 將短文寫在答題卡上。寫在本試題卷上無效。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Growing up with my father

My father always loves me and tries to help me.

When I was seven years old, I started my primary school. I had to get up early and did homework every day. I was so tired that I didn’t like to go to school. Then my father told me a lot of stories on my way to school, and helped me to plan my time. Day by day, I knew the importance of learning, and became interested in reading books.

No matter what difficulties I meet, my father is by my side. I am sure I will grow up better with my father.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求以“Growing up with…”為題作文，首先一定要把題目補(bǔ)充完整。短文重點(diǎn)寫與某某一起成長(zhǎng)，要言之有物，言之有事，可以通過講述這個(gè)人如果陪伴你、幫助你、影響你、感動(dòng)你、激勵(lì)你成長(zhǎng)的故事，來突出主題。講述這個(gè)人如何“陪伴你、幫助你、影響你、感動(dòng)你”可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，如果是具體的事例，就要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。從人稱上看，本題是第一人稱和第三人稱形式。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：第一段只有一句話，開門見山，直奔主題：父親一直愛我，一直盡力幫助我；第二段通過講述父親如何幫助我明確讀書的目的和重要性的故事，具體說明了父親怎樣伴我成長(zhǎng)；第三段進(jìn)一步明確短文主題：無論我遇到什么困難，父親都在我的身邊。我相信在父親的陪伴下我會(huì)成長(zhǎng)得更好。短文脈絡(luò)清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，中心突出。文中用得較好的句型、詞組有：so…that…；day by day, the importance of；become interested in；no matter；等等。