Question

【題目】

請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的提示，寫一篇短文介紹你的朋友Judy。

要求：字?jǐn)?shù)在80左右，中文須包括所有提示的內(nèi)容，每個(gè)方面都可適當(dāng)加以想象發(fā)揮。

基本信息：14歲，高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡，在七年級(jí)（3）班，最喜歡的學(xué)科是……

生活和飲食：每天6點(diǎn)半起床，步行上學(xué)，常吃/從不吃/很少吃……，每周鍛煉……（給出合理建議）

愛好：購(gòu)物，這周末想為媽媽買……作為生日禮物

My friend

Answer 1

【答案】

My friend Judy

Judy is my best friend. She is fourteen years old. She is slim、tall and beautiful with a pair of glasses on her face.

We are in Class3,Grade seven. She is good at English and maths. Every day she gets up at six o’clock and goes to school on foot after having breakfast. Usually she likes bread ，apple and milk for breakfast, At noon, she often eats hamburger, potatoes and tomatoes for lunch. she doesn’t like carrots although it is good for her health. However ,she always takes exercise in the park.so she is very healthy in our class.

Besides, going shopping is her favourite hobby. She wants to buy a skirt for her mother as her birthday gift at this weekend .

【解析】

試題分析： 本文要求學(xué)生用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)介紹自己的朋友 Judy，分別介紹她的基本信息，生活及其飲食特點(diǎn)，另外，還要談及其個(gè)人愛好與打算。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文嚴(yán)格按照要求書寫，要點(diǎn)齊全，詳略得當(dāng)。思路清晰，語言流暢。準(zhǔn)確地使用了優(yōu)美的短語和主從復(fù)合句。例如短語有：with a pair of glasses on her face.（獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）。is good a“擅長(zhǎng)于”。gets up“起床”；goes to school on foot“ 走路上”學(xué)。having breakfast.動(dòng)名詞短語。takes exercise“做鍛煉”wants to buy…主從復(fù)合句: she doesn’t like carrots although it is good for her health.動(dòng)名詞短語作主語：going shopping is her favourite hobby.