Question

假如你叫劉明，是美國(guó)中學(xué)生艾麗斯的朋友，你收到了她的電子郵件，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)，回答她的問(wèn)題，提出你的建議。并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
你是否遇到過(guò)這樣的問(wèn)題？
該借給她錢(qián)還是不借給她錢(qián)？
若她忘記歸還該怎么辦？
注意：恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用條件狀語(yǔ)從句，句子結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，80詞左右。
Dear Liu Ming,
Hi! I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you .
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I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming

Answer 1

Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear from you. I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She will probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I am afraid you may lose the friend. If she really forgets about the money, you can remind her in a polite way. For example, you can ask her if the money helped her at that time.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I will get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來(lái)信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來(lái)信。在回信中對(duì)涉及的問(wèn)題都要有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。