Question

7．情景作文
每年的8月8日是"全民健身日"，為了讓這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)更加深入人心，某英文雜志的（運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康）欄目正在以Let's Do Exercise Together 為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格 中的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇文章，向該欄目投稿．

運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性	運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式
●保持健康 ●培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格 …	●上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車 ●上體育課上做各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球…） ●周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等 …

參考詞匯：keep fit，train，a person's character，on foot，PE classes，climb mountains
要求：1．短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
      2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
      3．文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名．
                   Let's Do Exercise Together
   It's very important for us to do exercise．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是為了讓"全民健身日"這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)更加深入人心，某英文雜志的（運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康）欄目正在以Let's Do Exercise Together 為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容中的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇文章，向該欄目投稿．時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱是第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性：保持健康、培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格；2．運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間和方式：上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車、上體育課做各種鍛煉、周末與朋友爬山游泳等．常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：help to do，what's more，it's+adj+for sb．to do sth．，such as…等．

解答 It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給出情景的圖表作文．圖表內(nèi)容較為簡(jiǎn)單，要全部包括在作文中．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫，注意作文的條理．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣．考生在時(shí)間允許的情況下，可先列出大致提綱，再根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開(kāi)做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書(shū)寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語(yǔ)法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．