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17．最近，廣安市掀起"實現(xiàn)偉大中國夢，建立美麗繁榮和諧廣安"為主題的教育活動．某中學(xué)的English club正在舉辦圍繞這一主題的征文活動．假如你是該中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示及要求，并結(jié)合自身實際寫一篇應(yīng)征稿．
內(nèi)容提示：
◆尊敬師長，禮貌誠實
◆友善待人，樂于助人
◆節(jié)約食物，不要浪費
◆遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈
◆保護(hù)環(huán)境，美化城市
參考詞匯：respect（V．尊敬）、obey、trafbc lights
    要求：1．字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右，不包含已給出的句子字?jǐn)?shù)．
          2．要點完整，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，意思連貫．語句通順．書寫規(guī)范．
          3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息．
Making Guang'an better and better
These days，people in Guang'anare doing"Achieving China Dream，make Guang'an better and better．"As middle school students，We should do some things for it．First of all，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red．Fourth，we shouldn't waste the food，saveit instead．Last but not least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment．For example，we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．
     In a word，if everyonetries his best，our city----Guang‵an will be better and better!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，需要我們根據(jù)題目中所給的信息，用英語寫一篇關(guān)于"實現(xiàn)偉大中國夢，建立美麗繁榮和諧廣安"的作文：寫作要點，1．尊敬師長，禮貌誠實2．友善待人，樂于助人3．節(jié)約食物，不要浪費4．遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈5．保護(hù)環(huán)境，美化城市
人稱主要為第一人稱，時態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時．
重點短語和句型：
First of all，Second，Third，Last but not least，首先，第二，第三，最后也是最重要的
spit here and there 四處吐痰
It's+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么樣的
had better do sth最好做某事

解答 答案：
Making Guang'an better and better
These days，people in Guang'anare doing"Achieving China Dream，make Guang'an better and better．"As middle school students，We should do some things for it．
First of all，we should respect our teachers，parents and the old．Also，we ought to be polite and honest．（尊敬師長，禮貌誠實 ）Second，it's always good to be kind，friendly and helpful to others．（善待人，樂于助人） Third，we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red（高分句型）．（遵守交規(guī)，不闖紅燈）Fourth，we shouldn't waste the food，save it instead．（節(jié)約食物，不要浪費） Last but not least，it's important and necessary to help protect the environment（高分句型）．For example，we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about．We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass．（保護(hù)環(huán)境，美化城市）
In a word，if everyonetries his best，our city----Guang‵an will be better and better!

點評 此為提綱作文．要仔細(xì)審題，抓住重點，把所給信息條理清楚的表達(dá)出來，要求語句通順；語法，時態(tài)正確；書寫規(guī)范．