分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是以"MY HERO"為題介紹你的偶像-林丹.時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時.人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點:
1)你酷愛體育運動,你的偶像是林丹;
2)林丹是個很善良的人,他總是和其他人友好相處.
3)林丹目前在羽毛球領(lǐng)域處于領(lǐng)先地位,贏得了來自中國,乃至全世界的高度贊揚;
4)通過多年的努力,他取得了巨大成就,他還能成功設(shè)法保持事業(yè)和家庭間的平衡;
5)作為一名忙碌的九年級學(xué)生,你…
常用到的重點短語:
be crazy about 著迷
get on with sb 與某人相處
not only…but also…不僅…而且…
what's more 再者
manage to do sth成功設(shè)法做某事
try to do sth盡力做某事
make progress 取得進步
【高分句型】
1.①What's more,he ②manages to ③keep a good balance between his career and family.
①what's more 再者
②manage to do sth成功設(shè)法做某事
③keep a balance between …and…兩者之間保持平衡
2.I ①want to work hard ②to make great progress in my study.
①want to do sth想要做某事
②動詞不定式做目的狀語,make progress取得進步.
解答 My name is Zhao Ming Hao.I am crazy about sports.My hero is Lin Dan(我酷愛體育運動,我的偶像是林丹).Lin Dan is a very kind man,he always gets on well with others.(林丹是個很善良的人)Now he takes the lead in badminton.He has won high praise from not only China but also the whole world.(在羽毛球領(lǐng)域處于領(lǐng)先地位)Through many years'of hard work,Lin Dan has got great achievement.What's more,he manages to keep a good balance between his career and family.【高分句型】(取得了巨大成就)As a busy Grade 9 student,my love of sports has become the cause of my problem.I decide to learn from Lin Dan.I will try to achieve a balance between my school work and hobbies.I want to work hard to make great progress in my study.【高分句型】(補充:保持學(xué)業(yè)和愛好的平衡)
點評 這是一篇給材料作文.本文給出了一些要點,并給出了作文的開頭.我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點.動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不要遺漏要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫,要注意主謂一致等問題.寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.
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