【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

中學(xué)生普遍面臨著很多煩惱，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)描述下面表格中列出的問(wèn)題，并提出自己的建議。

煩惱1

整天有做不完的作業(yè)，經(jīng)常熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，無(wú)暇顧及個(gè)人愛(ài)好；

煩惱2

父母太忙，沒(méi)有時(shí)間陪自己；

煩惱3

幾乎沒(méi)有親密的朋友可以交流，經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)；

煩惱4

對(duì)自己的體重不滿意，不知如何改變；

煩惱5

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建議

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要求：1、條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順；

2、100詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【答案】

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help. xKb 1 .Com

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)所給材料 可知這是提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前首先仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料，確定寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述符合語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能?chē)@內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：too busy to stay with them；don't have any close friends to talk to；To lose weight and keep fit，等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用， 讓文章更出彩。

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