Question

【題目】書面表達

71. 隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展，人們消費觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化。“網(wǎng)購”成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體當中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。

注意：1. 所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱及其它相關信息，否則不予評分；

3. 詞數(shù)：80 詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞匯：

網(wǎng)購:shopping on line, 避免做某事:avoid doing sth,

商品:goods, 導致:cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如With the development of the Internet，be used to doing，on line，in our daily life，join the group，avoid doing，be interested in，Every coin has two sides，on one hand，on the Internet，on the other hand，all in all等。而With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line./ Shopping on line has many advantages. / On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.等多種非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)和綜合句式的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。