Question

14．我國每年"舌尖上的浪費"能養(yǎng)活2億人．這個數(shù)字觸動了所有國人的心．杜絕浪費．吃光盤中食物的"光盤行動"得到了大眾的積極響應(yīng)．請根據(jù)以下圖片提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點和想法，以Save Food為題寫一篇文章．
要求：
1.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)． 
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Save Food
The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，To save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
I hope we can start now．Save food，save our lives．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)以下圖片提示，結(jié)合自己的觀點和想法，以Save Food為題寫一篇文章．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．描述圖畫；圖片中有一些人在浪費食物，并給出一些節(jié)約糧食的建議
2．我的觀點和想法；
 
常用到的重點短語：
eat up 吃光
in a word 總之
more than 多于
dining out外出吃飯
【高分句型】
1．First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．
動詞不定式做目的狀語．
2．We shouldn't order the food①more than we can eat②while dining out，③because many people in the world don't have enough food ④to eat．
①more than 多于
②while dining out是while we dine out 的縮寫
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
④動詞不定式作為后置定語，修飾前面的enough food．

3．①In a word，I think ②③it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
①In a word總之
②think后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．
③it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語

解答 The annual waste food in China is almost much enough to feed about 200 million people a year．The government has called on us to save food so that we can enjoy a happy life．We middle school students should do something for it．
First，to save food，we shouldn't waste any of our food．【高分句型】We should eat up all the food．We shouldn't order the food more than we can eat while dining out，because many people in the world don't have enough food to eat．【高分句型】Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．（描述圖畫）In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．【高分句型】（我的觀點和想法）

I hope we can star now．Save food，save our lives．

點評 圖畫是作文的依據(jù)，要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，弄清畫面所反映的真實內(nèi)涵或蘊含的某種哲理．
運用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或短語正確表達(dá)各圖的意思．然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來．
串連時，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然．