Question

4．良好的生活與學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣對(duì)我們的成長(zhǎng)是非常重要的．請(qǐng)從以下的習(xí)慣中選擇一個(gè)你以前做得不夠好，但現(xiàn)在已具備的好習(xí)慣，談一談你養(yǎng)成這個(gè)習(xí)慣的過(guò)程及收益．
要求：（1）不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；
（2）內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊；
（3）80詞左右；
（4）文章的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
 
My good habit

Early to bed and early to rise is my good habit．

My good habit is early to bed and early to rise．Two years ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked reading books in bed．
Every day after I finished my homework，I lay in bed until 24：00 o'clock．The next day I couldn't get up on time．I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class．It was too bad．With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit．
Ever since then，I go to bed early and get up early．I never go to school late again．As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in school now．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)（選擇一個(gè)你以前做得不夠好，但現(xiàn)在已具備的好習(xí)慣，談一談你養(yǎng)成這個(gè)習(xí)慣的過(guò)程及收益），動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．

解答 My good habit is early to bed and early to rise．Two years ago，when I was a Grade 7 student，I liked reading books in bed．Every day after I finished my homework，I lay in bed until 24：00 o'clock．The next day I couldn't get up on time．I used to be late for school，and I felt tired in class．It was too bad．With the help of my teacher and my parents，I gave up the bad habit．Ever since then，I go to bed early and get up early．I never go to school late again．As a result，I'm much stronger and doing better in school now．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文，內(nèi)容是貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際的習(xí)慣問(wèn)題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞這些要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，注意將這些要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)出來(lái)，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．