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【題目】書面表達(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。

近期各種電視選秀節(jié)目愈發(fā)火熱，有些中學生也加入了選秀的行列。英語課上，張老師讓你們對這種現(xiàn)象進行討論。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿，并在課堂上發(fā)表演說。

內(nèi)容包括： 1．描述生活中人們參加各種電視選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)象。

2．談談同學們對電視選秀節(jié)目的看法(包括優(yōu)點和缺點)。

3．作為一名中學生，你如何理智地看待電視選秀節(jié)目?

作文要求： 1．不能照抄原文；．不得在發(fā)言稿中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。．

2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Hi，everyone! would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days.

That's all for my speech．Thanks for listening．

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi,everyone! I would like to say something about the talent shows that are popular on TV these days. As we can see, both the young and the old, even children are crazy about taking part in such shows.

In our class, different classmates have different opinions about TV talent shows. Some classmates think the shows can make them famous and rich. They think young people should do something different. If they have the chance to show their abilities to others, they can be more confident. Others think it’s very hard for them to become successful. If they don’t do well in the show, they will be laughed at.

As a student, I think we are too young to take part in these TV talent shows, and we should study hard and spend more time on our study.

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為話題類作文，要求對電視選秀節(jié)目寫一篇發(fā)言稿。寫作要點已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務，務必把各要點表達清楚。

寫作亮點：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務，要點全面，結構連貫。本文應用了很多短語使得文章很生動，例如As we can see, both the young and the old, even children are crazy about taking part in such shows. we should study hard and spend more time on our study.條件狀語從句 If they have the chance to show their abilities to others, they can be more confident. If they don’t do well in the show, they will be laughed at.的應用更使得短文表述更準確。總之，該文是一篇不錯的短文。