Question

12．你校學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你以班長(zhǎng)的身份用英語(yǔ)通知全班同學(xué)．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．本周五晚上七點(diǎn)半在會(huì)議廳舉行；
2．節(jié)目豐富，積極參與，玩得愉快；
3．穿著整潔，不可四處走動(dòng)、大聲喧嘩；
4．晚會(huì)大約兩小時(shí)；
5．請(qǐng)根據(jù)情況補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)60---80，通知開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和人名；
3．書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔．
參考詞匯：English evening 英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)；meeting hall 會(huì)議大廳；neatly 整潔地
  Fellow students，may I have your attention，please？I have something important to  tell you．
We will have an English evening at 7：30 this Friday night at the meeting hall．There will be a lot of programs at the evening．You can take an active part in the evening and I'm sure you'll enjoy yourselves．You should dress neatly，and don't walk around or talk loudly during the evening．It will last about two hours．And finally．Please get there on time and keep the hall clean．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容為你校學(xué)生會(huì)將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)晚會(huì)，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你以班長(zhǎng)的身份用英語(yǔ)通知全班同學(xué)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱主要為第二、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．本周五晚上七點(diǎn)半在會(huì)議廳舉行；
2．節(jié)目豐富，積極參與，玩得愉快；
3．穿著整潔，不可四處走動(dòng)、大聲喧嘩；
4．晚會(huì)大約兩小時(shí)；
5．請(qǐng)根據(jù)情況補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
there be 有
take part in 參加
enjoy oneself 玩的開心
on time 準(zhǔn)時(shí)
keep sb/sth+adj 保持…怎么樣
【高分句型】
1．There will be a lot of programs at the evening．
there be 句型的一般將來(lái)時(shí)，there will be．
2．You can①take an active part in the evening and I'm sure②you'll ③enjoy yourselves．
①take part in 參加
②sure后加上省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
③enjoy oneself 玩的開心

解答 Fellow students，may I have your attention，please？I have something important to tell you．
We will have an English evening at 7：30 this Friday night at the meeting hall．（本周五晚上七點(diǎn)半在會(huì)議廳舉行）There will be a lot of programs at the evening．【高分句型】You can take an active part in the evening and I'm sure you'll enjoy yourselves．【高分句型】（節(jié)目豐富，積極參與，玩得愉快）You should dress neatly，and don't walk around or talk loudly during the evening．（穿著整潔，不可四處走動(dòng)、大聲喧嘩）It will last about two hours．（晚會(huì)大約兩小時(shí)）And finally．Please get there on time and keep the hall clean．Thank you!（補(bǔ)充：準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加并保持會(huì)場(chǎng)干凈）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．