Question

8．緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來(lái)一個(gè)輕松的暑假．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面方框內(nèi)的提示寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕募倨谟?jì)劃．

暑  假  計(jì)  劃

1、好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松

2、讀書，因?yàn)樽x書既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識(shí)

3、陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)

4、參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)

5、…

注意：
1、詞數(shù)80～100；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名；
3、方框內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：知識(shí) knowledge，社會(huì)活動(dòng) social activities．The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀愕募倨谟?jì)劃．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來(lái)時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1、好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松
2、讀書，因?yàn)樽x書既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識(shí)
3、陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)
4、參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)
5．其他
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be going to 打算做某事
learn to do sth 學(xué)會(huì)做某事
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
try to do sth 盡力做某事
chat with sb 與某人聊天
take part in 參加

【高分句型】
1．I will read more useful books①because reading more books is ②not only interesting but also can③make me learn more knowledge．
①because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分．
③make sb do sth 讓某人做某事

2．I①am going to②take part in the social activities③so that I can know more about the society．
①be going to 打算做某事
②take part in 參加
③so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．
if possible是省略句，完整表達(dá)是if it is possible．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．（好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松）I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．（讀書，因?yàn)樽x書既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識(shí)）【高分句型】I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．（陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)）I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．（參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)）【高分句型】If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．（去上�？词啦�）【高分句型】I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達(dá)，主要介紹我的假期計(jì)劃，內(nèi)容包括假期的放松方式，學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容，幫助母親和參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)等，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意主要使用將來(lái)時(shí)，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意主要使用第一人稱，同時(shí)應(yīng)注意符合題意和語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性．